The Angels' Melancholia [SP]

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The Angels' Melancholia [SP]

Post by patho » Thu Jul 28, 2022 6:42 pm

The Angels' Melancholia is a very short sp_blood map that I've been working on for several weeks. It's my first proper map so don't expect anything extraordinary.

Unfortunately I don't have time for more details at the moment, life takes its toll.

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download my singleplayer blood map The Angels' Melancholia.

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Re: The Angels' Melancholia [SP]

Post by Dead Reckoner » Tue Aug 02, 2022 4:05 pm

Good base layout-wise. If you do get the time to detail more, it could definitely use more light sources (windows, torches, lights) or more sky ceilings, and more variable shading, especially in the sealed rooms that only have doors as openings. Even though it's a small map, it did feel confusing at times because of how similar all the rooms and halls look to each other. Some visual differentiation and landmarks could help here.

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